Raven Carter

[darkreaper666]

Character Name:Raven Emily Carter
Year: 4
Preferred House (you may not get it, unless you are a canon character): Slytherin
Strengths: Dark Arts, Friends and Family
Weaknesses: Guys, her emotions and her mother.
Personality: Raven is sly and mean. She hates anyone who is not of Pure blood status and wont hesitate to destroy anything in her path. To her friends shes a different type of person. She is friendly and protective. She will do anything for her friends even if that means sacrificing her own life for them.
Brief History: Raven was born into a Pure blood family. Her mother, father and her elder brother Leon were all Slytherins. Since she could walk she has looked up to them. She stayed away from the Muggle world as often as she could because she dint want to get mixed up in all of that. Her brother taught her the ways he thought would be right for her. Like teaching her the Dark Arts. Since then she has done nothing but create havoc and mayhem wherever she goes.
Description or Celebrity Claim: Annette Olsen
RP Sample (must be at least a paragraph): As she stepped onto the train, Raven turned around to say goodbye to her parents one last time. "See you after the year is over Ravi." said her brother Leon who was smiling at her. Raven's mother smiled too. "Goodbye love." she said. Her father nodded in her direction. "Good Luck my child." he said. Raven smiled and boarded the train.

As it pulled away from the station she sighed and went to find a seat. She found a compartment which was occupied by some Slytherins. She recognized Leon's ex-girlfriend. "Sonia?" she said. Sonia lifted her head. "Raven! I'm so happy to see you please sit with us." she beamed. Raven accepted and sat down. Raven began to sing a little song. "Wow! Leon didn't mention you were such a good singer." Sonia said. Raven gave a weak smile. "Leon loves it when I sing. He says I'm a rare talent." Raven said.

A girl came by. "Whos she Sonia?" Raven asked. Sonia smiled. "A muggle born." she whispered. The girl opened the door. "Please help me." she begged. Raven folded her arms. "And why would we want to do that Mudblood?" she asked. The girl seemed offened. Raven laughed and drew her wand. "Leave now before its too late." she growled. Her eyes were cold and hard. The girl was shaking in fear. "Please I didn't mean to cause any harm." she said Raven laughed. "Sure now get lost and leave us alone, Mudblood." she said.
Your Name (or name on the board):

[Albus Dumbledore]

OK, a couple of things I'd like you to change before I can accept you.

First of all, there continues to be a freeze on Slytherin students above 5th year. If you could adjust the application to make her a fourth year, that would be preferred.

Secondly, please keep in mind that as of the time this board is set, Voldemort has really been at work for a couple of years, so she could not have grown up with her parents being big admirers of Voldemort. In fact, at this point, no one is entirely sure that Tom Riddle and Lord Voldemort are the same person.

Finally, your RP sample is fine, but it doesn't entirely seem to match the personality you have given. I realize that she is with friends and family and she is "nice" with them, but I would like to see a sample of her being "mean," if you could.

If you make these changes, I can accept you.

[darkreaper666]

done

[Albus Dumbledore]

OK. You're accepted. But please, as you roleplay, please check your grammar and don't forget to use the spellcheck button before you hit post. It works really well.

Thank you. I'll send you your Hogwarts Letter.